tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post3514356197527713161..comments2023-09-05T07:24:01.504-04:00Comments on Mina Burrows: 2nd Campaign Challenge & Fridays with FredMina Burrowshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-496363564482541042012-03-31T05:21:55.088-04:002012-03-31T05:21:55.088-04:00Well done Mina, this was a really intriguing story...Well done Mina, this was a really intriguing story. Love the names you used :) Congratulations - I've awarded you ninth place in the Judging Round! Make sure you check out my post to see the cool prize you've won :)<br /><br />Congrats again!<br /><br />Hugs,<br /><br />RachRachael Harriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-8542871662624531572012-03-15T21:01:48.369-04:002012-03-15T21:01:48.369-04:00All my senses were engaged. Well done!
Congrats. ...All my senses were engaged. Well done!<br /><br />Congrats. You've been shortlisted to move onto the Finals.Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-45944206112118705132012-03-13T15:32:28.355-04:002012-03-13T15:32:28.355-04:00Hi! Just to let you know you'v been shortliste...Hi! Just to let you know you'v been shortlisted as one of the top five to move on to Stage Two. (The semi-finals will be Stage Three and the finals will be Stage Four.) Congratulations :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09186491465911432817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-2618838950630070792012-03-12T19:16:51.177-04:002012-03-12T19:16:51.177-04:00thanks for sharing your story. liam sounds like an...thanks for sharing your story. liam sounds like an interesting fellow.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00912167351889969855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-35932846191422986182012-03-12T10:50:53.729-04:002012-03-12T10:50:53.729-04:00i really liked that! touching and forboding!i really liked that! touching and forboding!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-8798344066339318482012-03-11T18:28:04.220-04:002012-03-11T18:28:04.220-04:00I really enjoyed this! Great piece! It was like it...I really enjoyed this! Great piece! It was like it was cut out from a novel. <br /><br />Aww! I like Fred. lol. That's my Daddy's name. haha.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503400522084515874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-8960934514964184772012-03-11T13:14:44.694-04:002012-03-11T13:14:44.694-04:00Ooh, this is really great. I'm sorry I didn...Ooh, this is really great. I'm sorry I didn't get here sooner. :)Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11673194757089411682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-11692880359832706322012-03-11T12:13:54.689-04:002012-03-11T12:13:54.689-04:00Great story, tense and original! And Fred - so tal...Great story, tense and original! And Fred - so talented:)Gwen Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-23303271268829982102012-03-11T12:00:16.121-04:002012-03-11T12:00:16.121-04:00Great work. I just voted for you. :)Great work. I just voted for you. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-46599073489752401792012-03-11T06:31:24.988-04:002012-03-11T06:31:24.988-04:00Lots of info packed in there! Nice work - loved th...Lots of info packed in there! Nice work - loved the characters!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-6602745124583875392012-03-11T05:01:34.605-04:002012-03-11T05:01:34.605-04:00Rich & colourful... setting and characters!Rich & colourful... setting and characters!MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/fourth-campaign-challenge-no-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-34724203562408792542012-03-10T23:25:08.640-05:002012-03-10T23:25:08.640-05:00Voting!! Awesome :)Voting!! Awesome :)Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-32818869941035963582012-03-10T20:24:34.651-05:002012-03-10T20:24:34.651-05:00Love that last line!Love that last line!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-67662484523849755752012-03-10T18:33:02.977-05:002012-03-10T18:33:02.977-05:00Very imaginative and atmospheric writing. Definite...Very imaginative and atmospheric writing. Definitely sets us up to want to learn more. Nice!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-8330997980861322682012-03-10T16:07:32.225-05:002012-03-10T16:07:32.225-05:00Wow! This rocks! Love your writing style. Simply p...Wow! This rocks! Love your writing style. Simply put, this was great.<br />"Like!"Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-68836118759499067592012-03-10T11:33:54.394-05:002012-03-10T11:33:54.394-05:00"As far as destinies go, he was fine." A..."As far as destinies go, he was fine." Aw, so romantic!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-36067973245857708252012-03-10T10:44:55.685-05:002012-03-10T10:44:55.685-05:00It seems that a lot of writers this time around ar...It seems that a lot of writers this time around are giving Dystopia a try. And turning out some awesome entries at that. Yours is totally up there in the awesome category. Nice one! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-60571786597130228832012-03-09T22:06:41.387-05:002012-03-09T22:06:41.387-05:00Nice work, Mina! The last line was brilliant. :DNice work, Mina! The last line was brilliant. :DCarrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-84307778873895006882012-03-09T17:35:28.320-05:002012-03-09T17:35:28.320-05:00Really enjoyed this! You hit a lot of elements and...Really enjoyed this! You hit a lot of elements and positioned the reader in such a short amount of space! I got a lot out of this piece so wishing you lots of luck! <br /><br />I'd definitely recommend expanding because you've built a cool world here.<br /><br />My entry is #84. <br /><br />Just 'liked' your piece!Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823739886038280225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-88340976532977523492012-03-09T16:27:23.067-05:002012-03-09T16:27:23.067-05:00Love that Fred! Seriously, Mina, this isnt part of...Love that Fred! Seriously, Mina, this isnt part of a book you;re writing? Cause if not I am VERY disappointed. LOVE This piece. Creative, stark, futile, yet hope is there. Draws me in. So much is revealed in such little space..and darn it, i want to know more. And the ending! perfect and leaves you asking so many questions. Got me. Come on, keep going :)DonnaGalantihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16936331145444649588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-69935679737692602792012-03-09T14:37:41.877-05:002012-03-09T14:37:41.877-05:00For someone who doesn't write this genre, you&...For someone who doesn't write this genre, you've done a great job :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-52793555803922314532012-03-09T14:12:21.197-05:002012-03-09T14:12:21.197-05:00@Alex - Thx. Fred is totally silly!
@Morgan - Th...@Alex - Thx. Fred is totally silly!<br /><br />@Morgan - Thx, sweetie. I wasn't sure...<br /><br />@SP Bowers - It would have been fun to continue on this one. Oh well...Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-44690134196244307512012-03-09T13:20:31.392-05:002012-03-09T13:20:31.392-05:00Love the last line.Love the last line.S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-45543976516302315872012-03-09T11:49:53.137-05:002012-03-09T11:49:53.137-05:00Ohhh... this was fantastic. I really enjoy your wr...Ohhh... this was fantastic. I really enjoy your writing... great balance of description vs. tension. Off to "like" it ;)Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-83754418167249726722012-03-09T11:21:01.252-05:002012-03-09T11:21:01.252-05:00Yours is definitely one of the most original piece...Yours is definitely one of the most original pieces! And silly Fred.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com