tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post2323939789836556719..comments2023-09-05T07:24:01.504-04:00Comments on Mina Burrows: First Fight/First Kiss Blogfest -- Bring it on, baby!Mina Burrowshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-62783716223491914302012-06-14T16:12:58.081-04:002012-06-14T16:12:58.081-04:00Loved this one too Mina! I really enjoyed that sle...Loved this one too Mina! I really enjoyed that sleep/wake confusion before realisation struck. <br /><br />Great style!Neil Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09094796039326430540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-12612238940445650652012-06-13T22:54:14.390-04:002012-06-13T22:54:14.390-04:00She's sure got a good swing on her. ^_^
Great ...She's sure got a good swing on her. ^_^<br />Great scene.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-26781592784041338422012-06-13T22:30:35.311-04:002012-06-13T22:30:35.311-04:00This was great! I loved it. "Felt like pom po...This was great! I loved it. "Felt like pom poms"!! hahaha. Great imagery!Tanya Reimerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00293977395016853814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-44269140159154156762012-06-13T16:58:29.208-04:002012-06-13T16:58:29.208-04:00Excellent excerpt. I loved the build up of tension...Excellent excerpt. I loved the build up of tension from Emma waking up, figuring out where she was, getting her bearings, and then realising what Quinn had done, to her venting her anger on him. Very well written.Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102199553293874800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-690650209617561662012-06-13T12:18:52.451-04:002012-06-13T12:18:52.451-04:00I enjoyed her realizations and how she defied him....I enjoyed her realizations and how she defied him. Awesome piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-90308973509381220332012-06-13T12:03:21.726-04:002012-06-13T12:03:21.726-04:00Despite the specific context, I think we can all r...Despite the specific context, I think we can all relate - who hasn't woken up and realised they acted like a silly little puppy to a guy that charmed us a little?! Great piece.Spanjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13893837904669368614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-8388983508006928942012-06-13T10:21:47.498-04:002012-06-13T10:21:47.498-04:00Go Emma! Hee hee. I love a girl with fire. Thanks ...Go Emma! Hee hee. I love a girl with fire. Thanks for renewing my faith in our gender. :)Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-50043518875432350382012-06-13T09:58:45.458-04:002012-06-13T09:58:45.458-04:00Ooo.. nice and edgy! melikes! :DOoo.. nice and edgy! melikes! :DPK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-72868820560119288402012-06-12T23:33:23.352-04:002012-06-12T23:33:23.352-04:00Ahh,the girls say yes and give their trust away so...Ahh,the girls say yes and give their trust away so freely to the dashing Vampire. And then the next morning regrets set in. Unfortunately there is no turning back in this case.<br /><br />Great excerpt. I enjoyed it.James Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01080127767269357364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-21911812449625878112012-06-12T22:05:26.821-04:002012-06-12T22:05:26.821-04:00wow! Nice excerpt!wow! Nice excerpt!mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-5111507741118701252012-06-12T21:00:09.497-04:002012-06-12T21:00:09.497-04:00vampire romance, yes!! I couldn't wait to find...vampire romance, yes!! I couldn't wait to find out what happens in this scene. I love that the bite pisses her off, hehe. <br /><br />I hope I can read more someday!<br /><br />AndreaAndrea Teaganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-72501681888896091102012-06-12T19:23:21.682-04:002012-06-12T19:23:21.682-04:00Awesome excerpt! Lots of fire and I really want to...Awesome excerpt! Lots of fire and I really want to know what's going on.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-58773006387611627282012-06-12T15:56:34.137-04:002012-06-12T15:56:34.137-04:00Emma sounded awesome in the A-Z challenge, but she...Emma sounded awesome in the A-Z challenge, but she's even better now. Quinn definitely deserved what he got, even though it proably wasn't much to him. She's a pistol. Great scene! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-64833597936533836502012-06-12T14:41:53.349-04:002012-06-12T14:41:53.349-04:00Ohhh I likey a lot! How dare he bite her without t...Ohhh I likey a lot! How dare he bite her without telling why she needed to trust him. Arg!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing in our blogfest!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-64569059191536406302012-06-12T14:22:07.968-04:002012-06-12T14:22:07.968-04:00very good scene!very good scene!Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-1855110608124871192012-06-12T14:08:05.323-04:002012-06-12T14:08:05.323-04:00Cool. You just can't trust those vampires with...Cool. You just can't trust those vampires with the wicked charm and angelic faces. :)<br /><br />But I'm wondering what happened. Why didn't he have a choice?Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-30189426696609211712012-06-12T13:48:25.769-04:002012-06-12T13:48:25.769-04:00Very intense fight scene!Very intense fight scene!Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-18410260314195782242012-06-12T12:26:17.695-04:002012-06-12T12:26:17.695-04:00Oooo... sounds like a fabulous story, Mina! Love t...Oooo... sounds like a fabulous story, Mina! Love the sexual tension ;)Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-23315408048709190652012-06-12T12:23:28.910-04:002012-06-12T12:23:28.910-04:00Ooh, I like! What a great fight scene!Ooh, I like! What a great fight scene!Jaycee DeLorenzohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08796587039929398655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-29059778635517026642012-06-12T11:15:38.588-04:002012-06-12T11:15:38.588-04:00Nice excerpt! Quinn's yummy. :D
Thanks for p...Nice excerpt! Quinn's yummy. :D <br /><br />Thanks for participating in our blogfest!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526192448146446752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-61008051325988302612012-06-12T06:43:27.442-04:002012-06-12T06:43:27.442-04:00I love this scene! Great reason for a fight, too! ...I love this scene! Great reason for a fight, too! :)Laura Clipsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748489198957473503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-57113699940882519242012-06-12T02:50:03.013-04:002012-06-12T02:50:03.013-04:00Great, great scene! I love how it started so mello...Great, great scene! I love how it started so mellow, then built into complete rage!Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1513826534477780868.post-18397314192844244062012-06-12T02:46:55.779-04:002012-06-12T02:46:55.779-04:00So Emma's got a left hook! Nice, I like this. ...So Emma's got a left hook! Nice, I like this. And good for her for clocking him. You had me cheering.(:Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.com